Burnt Bread

Aug 13, 2015 10:38
I sometimes make toast, but I also sometimes sear the bread.

It is thought that eating burnt bread is bad for health.

Above all, it tastes bitter and bad.

However, there are some effective way to use burnt bread.

In fact, the burn bread has "deodorization effect" and "dehumidification effect."

If you put it in a refrigerator or a room, it will provide functionalities of dehumidification and deodorization.

Also, it is organic matter even if it's burnt black, so you can use it as fertilizers.
No. 1　Eddie's correction
  • I sometimes make toast, but I also sometimes sear the bread.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • It is thought that eating burnt bread is bad for health.
  • It is thought that eating burnt bread is bad for your health.
  • Above all, it tastes bitter and bad.
  • Above all, it tastes bitter and bad.
    　The sentence is correct, but a bit redundant.
  • However, there are some effective way to use burnt bread.
  • However, there are some effective ways to use burnt bread.
  • In fact, the burn bread has "deodorization effect" and "dehumidification effect."
  • In fact, the burnt bread has "deodorization effect" and "dehumidification effect."
  • If you put it in a refrigerator or a room, it will provide functionalities of dehumidification and deodorization.
  • If you put it in a refrigerator or a room, it will dehumidify and deodorize.
  • Also, it is organic matter even if it's burnt black, so you can use it as fertilizers.
  • Also, it is organic matter even if it's burnt black, so you can use it as a fertilizer.
Very interesting, where do you read this stuff?
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
I read this stuff on the following website.
http://matome.naver.jp/odai/2143763824762142901
I often use this site. :)
No. 2　karupin's correction
  • Burnt Bread
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I sometimes make toast, but I also sometimes sear the bread.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • It is thought that eating burnt bread is bad for health.
  • It is thought that eating burnt bread is bad for health.
    　"It is said that" works too :)
  • Above all, it tastes bitter and bad.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • In fact, the burn bread has "deodorization effect" and "dehumidification effect."
  • In fact, the burnt bread has "deodorization" and "dehumidification" effects.
  • If you put it in a refrigerator or a room, it will provide functionalities of dehumidification and deodorization.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Also, it is organic matter even if it's burnt black, so you can use it as fertilizers.
  • Also, it is still an organic matter even if it's burnt black, so you can use it as fertilizers.
Interesting! Now I have a valid excuse for burnt toast! haha
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Haha, great idea. I will use this as an excuse too.
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